How to Write an Objective Statement

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Experienced specialty carpenter seeking a supervisor
Writing an Objectivetitle --
A growing trend in new resumes is to give short shriftDesire to obtain a Carpenter Shop Foreman position
to or eliminate the "objective" heading altogether. Hereutilizing extensive trade skills and experience in the
are some compelling reasons to include this verytheatrical and special events industries.Finally, when
important career statement in your resume and awriting a career objective, resume writers should
top-10 tips list for writing a memorable one.Seizing anconsider the potential employer's point of view. In a
opportunity to submit as many applications as possible,competitive job market, where hiring personnel sit
some job applicants are omitting the traditionalbehind stacks of non-descript resumes, the inclusion of
objective statement element within their resumes.a little "self-promotion" is critical. Ask yourself, "what do
Rewriting objectives to accommodate every possibilityI have that this company wants?". Is it doing whatever
seems challenging, while including over-generalizedit takes to get the job done? Is it attention to detail?
statements seems to do more harm than good.Then write, "dedicated" or "quality-conscious". Consider
Nevertheless, when one considers the real purpose ofterms that describe your work habits while offering
an objective, the inclusion of it appears to besomething positive for the employer. Composing a
mandatory.good resume requires focused time and effort. Never
Whether written as "Career Goal", "Objective", ortry to hurry the process by leaving out the who, what,
"Position Desired", the time honored first statement isand why of your employment search. By utilizing the
still worthy of its place in a successful resume. When afollowing top-10 tips list as a guide for developing your
cover letter cannot be submitted, the objectiveobjective statement, you will be well on your way to
statement may be the job seeker's only chance tocreating your own job winning resume.
introduce himself. Traditionally, the objective statementThe Top-10 Tips List for Writing a Winning Objective
has served two purposes. The first obvious purpose isStatement:
to state clearly for the record, what type of position an1. Choose two adjectives to describe your work style
applicant desires. Second, this introductory sentencesuch as, "Dependable and conscientious student
suggests to the potential employer what type of skillseeking..." or
set or qualifications the applicant has. A third purpose"Detail oriented and quality conscious accounting clerk..."
for an announced career goal, one that is frequently2. Inform your potential employer of "what is in it for
misunderstood or under utilized all together, is thethem", such as, "...seeking to utilize 10+ years
implied employer benefits, or the "what's in it for myexperience in the industry..." or "...proven sales record..."
company" angle. Stating your career objective should3. One sentence is good, but making sense is better! If
include a real job title whenever possible. Sentenceswarranted, two sentences or in some cases a short
that skirt concrete job names, such as, "...seeking aparagraph will improve an objective statement.
position in marketing...", suggests two things to the4. If you know the job title for which you are applying,
reader; one, the applicant has no idea about whatuse it. There is nothing to be gained in trying to define a
types of jobs may be available in marketing and two,new position for yourself.
the applicant is desperate, and willing to take any job.5. If you have read the job description in an
Eagerness is good. Desperation is fatal. Defining theadvertisement, try to mirror one or two of the words
position desired is much more effective when thelisted. For instance, if the job announcement has
company's own job titles are used, such as, "...seekingindicated a desire for a self-starter, then experiment
a Sales Management position..." or "...pursuing anwith using the same term or one with the same
entry-level Public Relations Specialist position...". If youmeaning, such as in this case, "self-motivated" or
are responding to an advertisement that you have"self-directed".
seen, use the terminology in the ad, otherwise, do a6. As always, grammar and spelling count! It is
little digging. A business's website can be very helpfulexpected that resumes will have short sentence
for locating job title information specific to thefragments, abbreviations, and little punctuation, but your
company with which you want to apply. Admittedly, itcareer objective should be written without error.
takes a little more effort to customize and rewriteProofread!
each objective to match a potential employer's need,7. Avoid being too general in your statement. It is better
but the benefits will outweigh the time spent. Capturingto do a little research with the company and uncover
your qualifications in a one or two sentence resumesome of what they may be looking for than to write
objective can be a challenge, but by using the identifiedan over-generalized objective that essentially says
job title combined with a descriptive term such as,nothing to the employer.
"experienced" or "certified", the challenge is easily met.8. Ambition is nice, but statements such as "work my
Think about your skill set in broad terms. Are yourway up to..." will impress no one and may undercut
employment skills developed in areas ofyour credibility.
administration? In sales? Perhaps you have been9. If possible, experiment with writing an objective
employed as a carpenter. Are you skilled in cabinetwithout the use of the word, "I". It can be done! "I", is
making or exterior framing? Identifying your generalmore appropriately used in a cover letter. Using "I" and
abilities will give you some good leading sentences for"my" too frequently may loose a recruiter whose
your career objective, even in cases where you arecontext and focus is on what the company can gain
looking to change careers. Consider the followingfrom a new hire.
examples:10. Do not promise more than you can deliver! If you
Recent high school graduate, previously employed inare chronically late, then describing yourself as punctual
fast-food service industry, and aiming for a newwill only undermine your credibility later when it is
position --discovered that you have misrepresented
Dependable and enthusiastic student with experienceyourself.Copyright © 2005, Lisa Casey Perry, All
in sales and public contact seeking opportunity as arights reserved.